Category: Writers Block
Author's notes: some of these errors are intentional and so is the street talk. Sorry for the amount of cussing, but it's necessary.1
I, Robert josen, lay here in a partially hidden alleyway. I am badly wounded by a bullet, bloody, and worn out by the fight. It's not the coolest way to die, man, trust me. It hurts like hell. It wasn't smart, you know, but I had to fight, man, that bruce guy fucking made me. I sure as hell hate him.2
I was in the gang which was ruled by Bruce. Yo, I never liked that guy. Shit, he think he was so damn cool, but he's not. So, I challenged his views. Yo, I didn't like them, ya know? 'em, rules were just so fuckin retarded.3
He shott at me and the rest of 'em folks runned away. I ducked and dodged and shot back. It was the most scary thing I was ever through. I was so fucking scared for my life. Shit, man, he was shootin at me. He wanted me dead man.4
Ya know, I liked the shootin and when I got to shoot those fucking assholes. It was so damn fun. but, I can't be shot at, man, I just can't. Laying here bleeding is no fun. It is so fucking painful, and shit if this doesn't stop, I'll not be here for long!5
Then after a good while, that motherfuckers bullet hit me. I grazed him a few times but never full on got that Asshole! Damn! He hit me where it would cause damage but not enough that I could die. It was so fuckin shitty. Then that fuckin guy shot me again, taking my sloer movements to his advantage. It was so bad man. I just wasn't sure. I was both scared and anxious now. I said everything I could to him. I fucking got him back with the cussing. I think I die if I do heroic! come on man...! and, now I lay here, really gettin mor bad, man! It fucking hurts. I am scared. It is bad. I don't want to die. I need to go shoot down the assholes! 6
Goddamn, Bruce! fuck! Just go to hell, man!7
With that RobertJosen took his last breath, exhaled, and layed motionless. He was dead. The gang's second most powerful was no longer. Bruce Meyer Lived on and ruled his gang for a long while.
Author notes
Well, I hope this was good. It's a style I have never tried before. This is all a first for me. I hope it wasn't too painful to read. I hope it was realistic. Also, I hope the cussing wasn't out of place and awkward, I don't usually use profanity.
I can't tell you how much is realistic, since I don't know how gangs talk, but it definitely sounded like you were someone else completely, which is the idea. Way to go! I can't wait to see this turn into a whole story.
Hahaha! I don't know either but I tried. I'll see about that. It's a hard one to write....